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Suffocating the Rose

Sometimes
poetry hurts
my soul.

My body aches
at the truth.
bleeding

through the cut
page.

My mind stumbles
across the timber,
splinters in its feet.

Where is love
in poetry?

In the wind of words
or maybe in its sail.

What is love
in poetry?

A heart cut open
to view the shy center

or a sack of red roses
thrown into the blue frothing sea,

perhaps smash against the rocks
that line the shore.

Love is useless,
salt spray in the humble air.

Poetry by ~toptecky

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:smooch: thank you :blackrose:

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This is really pretty, though I'm not totally enthused with the blurriness.

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:bulletred: Reality can be beaten with enough imagination.
:bulletred: Words are magic.

:butterflytwo: VestalFlame :butterflytwo:
:rose: very beautiful.. well done

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Anne Rice
Very nice, I don't have much to say about this one except that I think you should do some of the details that I know you love so much on the center rose. You want to emphasize from the background of the other to roses. Now I don't necessarily mean a lot, perhaps just on the pedals and perhaps not much just enough so that it has more detail than the other two roses. Kind of like your making it "in focus" with a blurry background.

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I like rice. Rice is great if you're hungry and want 2000 of something.
~ Mitch Hedberg

Most truths can only be expressed as circular paradoxes
~Speaker for the Dead
Oh, nice job with the texture on the paper, by the way!

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I like rice. Rice is great if you're hungry and want 2000 of something.
~ Mitch Hedberg

Most truths can only be expressed as circular paradoxes
~Speaker for the Dead
Oh, nice job with the texture on the paper, by the way!

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I like rice. Rice is great if you're hungry and want 2000 of something.
~ Mitch Hedberg

Most truths can only be expressed as circular paradoxes
~Speaker for the Dead
I like the slight blur. The only distraction is the watermark, which I know you have your reasons for. Aside from that, very beautiful. Love the details. I'm guessing this to be your attack on the red rose which I know you dislike. :blackrose:

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As always, amazingly beautiful.

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